tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post1686064002976324576..comments2023-03-28T07:32:16.266-07:00Comments on Moineau en France: blank verseLaura Tattoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-52127555551012126052010-08-22T00:28:00.226-07:002010-08-22T00:28:00.226-07:00"fumigate the afterthought"
...on second...<i>"fumigate the afterthought"</i><br />...on second thoughts, keep that line :)Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-85656226241596257252010-08-19T10:40:27.350-07:002010-08-19T10:40:27.350-07:00loved your analysis!!! yeah, there's a lot goi...loved your analysis!!! yeah, there's a lot going on in that blank verse. :>>))) xoxoxooxoxoxLaura Tattoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-23874558880163738142010-08-19T08:43:50.801-07:002010-08-19T08:43:50.801-07:00You put things so well that one doesn't know w...You put things so well that one doesn't know where to start or end. Laying the lovely, fragile flowers on "stone". I love the contrast. It IS "stone" (how perfect), the noncompassion regarding "CFS" (not accidental) and the resulting hardness to one's own suffering. I also have a sense that there's a "lot going on" that can't be seen..."black sky" for the patient community but there's light in their eyes. I like your metaphor of the itch that nothing helps combined with the idea of a common explanation for a complex situation - "put it down to dryness." Yeah, sure doc. "A bandage" - cover over those symptoms [and no more whining]. Are we "coming home" from the "CFS" war, a war with doctors, federal agencies, the disinformed public to be treated to more official slanderous psychobabble - "a horror show"? "Fumigate" - as in remove the demeaning terminology and phony case definitions that form a social construct called "CFS"? That's how I take it. Very powerful for me. Thanks, Laura.moigohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946269638167149052noreply@blogger.com