tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post4380738803818036359..comments2023-03-28T07:32:16.266-07:00Comments on Moineau en France: all my pretty boasLaura Tattoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-31684499475085483022010-09-26T16:03:34.622-07:002010-09-26T16:03:34.622-07:00removed the entire last stanza. "yolk separat...removed the entire last stanza. "yolk separated from the albumen" seemed to say it all... the rest, too explicit. xoxoxoxooxoxLaura Tattoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-24677455961607737392010-09-26T16:00:09.079-07:002010-09-26T16:00:09.079-07:00yes, that's the ticket! :>>)) partially ...yes, that's the ticket! :>>)) partially written friday--almost gave it up for its "nonsense"--and completed saturday. we must press on, rose, even blue! :>>)) xooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxLaura Tattoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503853041054419287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1075224319054587651.post-88945107845260226852010-09-26T11:17:54.097-07:002010-09-26T11:17:54.097-07:00"winsome girls silenced by a brick"... m..."winsome girls silenced by a brick"... made me think of the wives and daughters that get stoned to death in Islam.<br /><br />The entire second stanza really hits home for me. This is a fascinating poem!<br /><br />I haven't posted anything new lately. I'm just stopping by looking for inspiration. Is this a new write for you?bluerosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09454168542120117493noreply@blogger.com