samedi 16 mai 2009
Iraq Haiku Series V: Child Martyr
i am floating now
above the wreckage
i am free to come and go
mother is at home
she is making our couscous
she breathes in its steam
sister is sewing
a tattered pant's cuff
from my brother's hand-me-downs
i am the baby
the one coddled tight
the light in everyone's heart
mountains rise and rivers flow
cities are spilling
with cars and people
i do not feel pain
as i float past you
i am beyond all pain now
my white-red garments
fall down to the ground
i am a naked angel
my mother adds salt
and raisins to the couscous
sister is singing
brother runs to me
or what was once me
but i'm free to come and go
i bend my two arms
into a breaststroke
i dive headlong into sky
pure iraqi sky
where prayers rise up
like the sweet steam of couscous
go to Iraqi Haiku Series I: Iraqi here
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Chilling - this brought back a memory from my time as a conscript in the South African Defence Force in 1980/81 - We were part of an invasion of Angola and one evening after bathing and shaving in the brown river we discovered corpses floating upstream - if I didn't feel dirty before (a 17 year old boy with premature misgivings about my country) I sure did afterwards
Friend you have created here a brilliant retention of innocence through some repetitive phrasing. I should think that this might have been the hardest to do.
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